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Xfactors part 9a : Episode 7

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  XFactors : Update Episode 6SCROLL DOWN FOR THE UPDATE
 So I'm wrapping up the first mini arc of Xfactors where the focus was on Jean Grey, but the medium I wish I could tell the story is more of an HBO, Showtime setting and so I decided to let you all see how I really envisioned it.  There are some 'episodes' I can't show because they are part of the story I haven't told yet, so once the next arc is done I'll fill those episodes in. 
  Now if you've actually read the story parts in my gallery you'll get a fuller picture of the blurbs below and I hope so added insight.
Here is what is posted
Part 1   part 2 part 3 part 4 part 5
Episode 1:
  Starts off ten years (in black and white) in the past with man we will know as Magento talking to his wife Martha.  She mentions how too controlled he is because of the things said at the party they just atte


Fred Dukes walks in the empty garage with his guard up.  He received a strange text three hours ago that instructed him to be here, one of the nicer 'hoods' as he called it, in L.A.  Dukes wasn't a dumb man but the text had three things that he had to agree to the meeting:

1.  The promise of money
2.  Whoever sent the text new about his 'heavy gift'
3.  Information on his daughter

  It was the last part that made him most afraid.  The first, well anyone could have sent that.  The second...well only people in his crew knew about his 'heavy gift' and of those only two knew what it actually was.  Dukes could affect the gravity around him in an area bout three feet in diameter, but he normally only used it on himself.  The heavier he made himself, the tougher his skin would be and it gave him increased strength as well.  There was a limit on doing it to himself but he had taken a shot point blank in the face with a shotgun and only ended up with a bruise that faded away by the next day (although it did hurt like hell) that limit also allowed him to lift a SUV with some effort.  Still the one thing about the text that made him afraid was his 'daughter'.  No one knew about that, no one but the girl's momma who had been dead for years now and she was too proud to tell anyone with good reason, she was his first cousin. 

  Her name was Susan Munroe and she and Fred were getting high the day she broke up with her man (although Fred is sure her man broke up with her).  One thing led to another and shit happened.  When she told him she was pregnant, they both agreed not to tell anyone, but Fred would provide her with money.  Even after Susan's death he gave his Aunt (the girls grandmother) money to 'help out'.  Her name was Orroro, some african shit he didn't like, but he called her "Ro Ro" and she called him Uncle Fred, not knowing who he truly was to her.   It had been about six months since he had seen her and Fred had gotten word that the gang she tried to join tried to rape her, but the three thugs ended up dead in some freak lightning accident.  He spent the last month trying to track her or his Aunt down, but it was like they vanished off the face of the Earth.

"Good day Mr. Dukes" a voice said from across the garage the lights from a Bentley keeping the tall male figure in a silhouette.

"Where is she?" Fred demanded

"Who?"

"You know what the fuck I'm talking about!"  He was angry now and increasing his weight every step forward "You tell me now or I'll..."

"Mr. Dukes..." the voice called out "You've been lied to, but I can make you a very, very rich man." 

"Lied...who the fuck are you?"

"My name is Sebastian Shaw and like the text said, I can use you and your gifts to make you a very rich man, but first I need to tell you something that will shake you up."

"Go 'head."

"Orroro isn't your daughter...."

TO BE CONTINUED
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firestorm31z's avatar
orroro not his daughter?  hmm interesting. based on what I wonder.